Nice one
It was better than the first and shows and improovment. i also know u did this really fast as uv only just ended your 1st one so to do all that is impressive.
good to see a story forming making more use of the cliff hangers
and maybe he used the car in the first one coz he likes the new car smell??
lol all that really needs work is the art as i know you can do better with a little time
well done